MOC: Natale Mortalis Revamp

God, I forgot this blog existed for a while. Whoopsie.

Between when I last posted about him and now, I’ve given my self-MOC Natale Mortalis a revamp. I’m not going to go over his story again, so this post will largely be dedicated to the figure itself, specifically what’s changed from the last version.

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Let’s begin this review starting from the bottom up. His feet and shins remain the same aside from adding 6-long armor shells to the backs.

Moving up, his thighs have changed from grey to black. This was more challenging than you might expect, as not only was this piece only ever released in this color in one set, but I was also using my only pair of these on Teridax. Fortunately, giving her grey thigh bone pieces did not detract from her appearance at all, so I felt no qualm switching the pieces. Instead of the 6-long armor shells, I attached the extra wide armor shells to the thighs.

The arms, weapon, and head are all identical, so that leaves the torso and the wing pack.

Previously, I had used a Luke Skywalker torso shell to cover the body. For a while, I thought this was ok. At some point during these past months, though, I took one look at it, thought it was lazy and decided that this piece would be the first thing to go. I found that the Piraka foot in black makes an interesting shape. But then my next problem cameIMG_2806  when the figure looked scrawny and gappy. An assortment of small Technic pieces did the trick just nicely.  You can also see that a Technic liftarm at the shoulders holds down his cape.IMG_2807

 

 

 

Lastly, instead of his wings just attaching to his shoulders and an awkward construction on his back that did absolutely nothing, now he’s been given a wing pack which he can use to fly through the air. In-universe, the pack is powered by a Kanohi Kadin, mask of flight, meaning he does not have to flap his wings in order to stay afloat. The wings act less like those of a bird and more so like those of aIMG_2805 jet.

Before I go, I would like to mention that yes, that is a Kanohi Kraahkan attached to a 2015 Bionicle head. How did I do it? Well, I’m not going to answer that question here and now, but I will say that it’s actually quite simple, requiring only two additional pieces to pull off (but I used three because it looks better).

 

 

MOCs: The Brotherhood’s Leadership

The Brotherhood of Makuta consists of many members all around the world, with many countries having their own individual branches. Every branch is connected to a tree and every tree has its roots. Today, I am going to talk about the Makuta’s head duumvirate: Miserix and Teridax.

Miserix

IMG_2202Miserix was a simple man wanting a simple life in Ta-Lachia, Okoto. Like many of his peers, he had heard the tales of Ekimu and the noble Toa and how they vanquished the evil Makuta after he had succumbed to his greed. Unlike his peers however, he didn’t like the story as it was at face value. He knew that there are two sides to every story, so he took it upon himself to research Makuta’s upbringing and what drove him mad. He attempted to bring others to his cause but to little avail until he encountered a young woman named Teridax (more on that later).

From there, the two founded the Brotherhood of Makuta. Their mission is to promote independent thinking and critical analysis; more specifically to “inspire freedom of intelligence in our youth and exercise of knowledge for our future.”

Although Miserix is a decent enough person himself, he is just one man, meaning he cannot control all of the actions of others in the Brotherhood. This has led him to becoming the scapegoat for some of their wrongdoings on more than one occasion. Miserix believes that his nemesis, Plomien the Crown Prince of Ta-Lachia, is exaggerating the claims to bring more dirt unto him, but has no way to confirm or deny this. Nevertheless, after fleeing from Okoto, he vowed to have a much tighter grip on his organization from now on.

Teridax

Sou-Lachia was the last region Miserix visIMG_2199ited before contemplating giving up his quest of validating Makuta. There, he met a young woman named Teri. Teri was interested in hearing of Makuta’s story, as the legend of Ekimu and the Toa had not yet reached the Shadow region. Miserix explained the story to her–in his way to convince her to join his cause. Now that Miserix was no longer alone, his belief now had strength. Knowing how difficult it would be to teach the masses, Miserix and Teri officially formed the Brotherhood of Makuta. The temporary HQ was Teri’s house, but Miserix considered this more than enough for now.

Fast forward a few months. At least 10 others have joined the Brotherhood and Teri had transformed into a toa of Shadow. Believing her old name would no longer fit her appearance, she renamed herself “Teridax,” after legends of old. Now that she could rival other toa, Teridax became the face of the Brotherhood whilst Miserix operated in the shadows.

Teridax wears the Kanohi Hau, mask of Shielding. Simply enough, this allows her to shield herself from any incoming physical attack that she is aware of.

Trivia

  • I have not given a name to Miserix’s mask yet, but Lego calls it the “Protector Mask of Fire.” I will not be sticking with this because I believe masks should vary in power, not in element.
  • Teridax’s sudden transformation into a toa is what prompted Mutran to begin Project Carver.
    • While Miserix has voiced interest in becoming a toa himself, he’s prohibited Mutran from experimenting on him. He’s decided to wait for it to happen naturally, if it happens at all.
  • Teridax’s mask is spraypainted black, but unfortunately I’m an idiot; I didn’t spray it properly so there are air bubbles and other bumps around the outside of the mask. This actually works in my favor as it ends up being an unintentional reference to the Infected Hau.

MOCs: “Project Carver”

“Project Carver” refers to the experiments performed by Makuta Mutran in an attempt to discover what causes Okotans to transform into toa. History has well documented the how, but never the why, leaving people like Mutran unsatisfied. Unfortunately, these experiments ended in failure; subjects were grown to toa-size and gained animalistic characteristics, but lost their innate elemental abilities.

Mutran

IMG_2193Mutran is the Brotherhood of Makuta’s head scientist. Often considered insane by his comrades, he cares little for the repercussions of his experiments as long as he is able to get results. Because of his “shoot first, ask questions later” mindset, he has been praised by his brethren for achieving what should’ve been impossible on more than one occasion.

Mutran wears the Kanohi Miru, Mask of Levitation. Simply enough, this mask grants him the ability to levitate for a short time or leap tremendous distances. He dons protective armor on his left arm to work in intense environments (high temperatures, contagions, etc.).

Krika

IMG_2197Little is known of Krika’s life before he volunteered to participate in Project Carver. After participating, he came to regret his decision. His body became a grotesque husk of flesh and bones; he gained the head of a fly, talons of a hawk and his neck elongated to unnatural lengths for a humanoid. Because most of the mass in his torso moved up to his shoulders, Krika became top-heavy and was forced to learn to walk again. Although deeply troubled by his new appearance and graced with an intense hatred for Mutran, Krika finds solace in that in a world of biomechanical men, he doesn’t look as out-of-place as he initially feared.

Krika wears the Kanohi Crast, Mask of Repulsion. Simply enough, this mask allows him to create a small forcefield to repel nearby targets; he can use this mask on himself to leap tremendous distances. He wields two giant axes, both to aid him to walk (initially) and as a means to ward off opponents. However, Krika is not a warrior and avoids confrontation wherever he can. If he can’t, he carries a large gun on his back at all times as a last resort.

Gorast

IMG_2195Gorast was the next test subject after Krika. While she was already not the nicest person to begin with, Mutran tried mixing her DNA with that of a mosquito, ultimately amplifying her jerkish tendencies. As a result of her experiments, her limbs became unusually lanky and she grew a second set of arms. She did have reservations regarding her new appearance, but quickly dismissed them as she believed that her new beauty was the “unconventional variety.”

Gorast wears the Kanohi Felnas, Mask of Disruption. This mask allowed the wearer to cause a target’s natural abilities to go haywire, provided she could make physical contact with her opponents. She has taken special martial arts class to make use of her newly-elongated limbs and wears a jump pack on her back, allowing her to leap tremendous distances (I think I’m beginning to notice a trend here).

Vamprah

Vamprah was one of the last to participate in Project Carver. The changes brought on by IMG_2192this experiment turned him from a typical Okotan male to a man trapped in a wolf’s body. Unlike Krika and Gorast, both of whom had negative opinions about their new forms, Vamprah completely approved of the changes, enjoying the challenges that come with being a primitive hunter. Don’t be fooled by his canine appearance, though: Vamprah is still a sentient being and does fully understand the world around him. His ability to reason makes him an incredibly dangerous predator and someone no one should underestimate.

Vamprah wears the Kanohi Avsa, Mask of Hunger. This mask allows him to drain the energy and light from opponents, reducing their will to fight. He does not use weapons like other Makuta, but uses his front claws, barbed tail, and enhanced sense of smell to get the job done.

Trivia

  • Krika is the only character in this post (and the only one of the Makuta that have IMG_2191counterparts in Lego’s official Bionicle stories) whose set I’ve owned before.
  • Rumor has it that Gorast and Madilim were once in a romantic relationship but have since ended on a sour note. I wonder what happened to them?
  • Vamprah is what this guy wishes he could be.
  • Vamprah retains the ability to stand on two legs like regular people; he simply chooses to walk on four legs a majority of the time because he wants to.
  • Project Carver was one of the factors that contributed to the Makuta’s escape from Okoto, but was not the deciding factor; because all of Carver’s test subjects were rational, consenting adults, the Okotan government couldn’t prosecute Mutran solely for this.
    • There was, however, one experiment of interest that led to the Makuta’s demonization. What was this experiment? You’ll find out soon enough.

Story Time: Classifying (Most of) the Species

My Bionicle world is filled with many species, a number of which are sentient. To try and make things clearer for the future, in this post I will highlight some of the more prominent sentient species in this world.

Okotans

Originating from the region of Okoto, this species of bio-mechanical man averages at only three feet tall in their natural state. Where they lack in height they compensate with limited elemental control, typically correlating to the region they were born (see chart below). Once an Okotan is fully mature, they have the potential to turn into toa (not to be confused with Toa, the political party), enhanced beings who have doubled in size and have gained significant control over their particular element.

Screen Shot 2018-09-26 at 6.12.12 PM.pngAlmost all Okotans are seen wearing a Kanohi mask of their choosing. These masks serve a number of purposes on Okotans; the main ones being (1) they provide a power specific to the mask and (2) enhance the wearer’s elemental abilities when worn and hinder them when not.

Notable Okotans include: Miserix, Mutran, and Cojera.

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Mutran (left) is an ordinary Okotan while Mengele has transformed into a toa.

Notable Okotans who have turned into toa include: Madilim, Pragna Vyza, Teridax, Settel, Nantu, and Mengele.

When a toa reaches the senior years of his or her life, they can change once again into
turaga, shrinking down to two-thirds of their previous size and sacrificing a majority of their elemental abilities. Where they lose physicality, turaga gain wisdom. I have no notable turaga characters at the moment, which is why I saved this section for last.

Marlinans

Marlinans come from the northeastern most part of the world, naming the place they originated from after themselves. The species towers over their cousins, the Okotans, averaging between five-and-a-half to eight feet tall. Unlike Okotans, however, Marlinans lack elemental powers, instead they rely on their natural strength and agility to get the job done. Also distinguishing Marlinans from Okotans is that they do not undergo a metamorphosis-like process that the Okotans do (base Okotan -> toa -> turaga); with Marlinans, what you see is what you get.

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Dannato Yuuzhan

Similarly to Okotans, Marlinans are typically seen wearing Kanohi. That said, the Kanohi are not ingrained in Marlinan society as they are in Okotan culture, only entering relevance less than a millennium ago; even then many Marlinans choose their masks based on their design rather than their functionality.

Notable Marlinans include: Natale Mortalis, Benedict Attarai, Antaedymn, and Dannato
Yuuzhan.

Rahkshi

Rahkshi are a rare species of insectoids scattered across the planet. These bugs are an anomaly among sentient species because they follow a pack mentality like those commonly seen in wolves. Rahkshi will form groups between six and twelve members, from which one (typically the oldest) is deemed the Alpha and leads the group. Another

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Vorahk in the foreground is being observed by Guurahk, another Rahkshi, and Madilim, a toa, in the background.

member, deemed the Beta, takes second-in-command. Similar to Okotans, Rahkshi have powers connected to their biology, but they are not elemental, rather controlling things such as fear, anger, poison, shattering, etc.

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Panrahk

Because the species is rare, this is almost all researchers can definitively say about them. No one is certain if their powers are the same across the different types of Rahkshi (such as how all toa originating from Ta-Lachia will be toa of fire) or if said powers are unique to the individuals. There simply isn’t enough evidence to conclude one way or another.

What is known about Rahkshi is that, unlike most insectoids, they are vertebrates. As a matter of fact, their pronounced spines are a species defining trait. Up until a few years ago, a species called the Owadinen (pronounced oh-WAH-dih-nen) (which looked very similar to Rahkshi, albeit lacking their signature spine) was considered one half of the Rahkshi species, believing sexual dimorphism was the reason some had spines and some did not. This theory was disproven when both male and female Owadinen were discovered.

Notable Rahkshi include: Turahk, Kurahk, Vorahk, Guurahk, Lerahk and Panrahk.

Notable Owadinen include: Zalon.

Unidentified Species

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“The Bird” (left) is of an unknown species, while Kalther is a Marlinan.

There are also a number of characters who come from

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“Seven Alarm”

species which I haven’t bothered given a proper name to as of yet. Many of these individuals are the only noteworthy member of their species, leaving it up for debate whether naming the species is even necessary.

Trivia

  • Marlinans and Oktotans are similar enough genetically that the two species could breed and the resulting child would develop fairly normally without much issue.

 

The Journey Begins (About the Blog)

Welcome to the Toa Archives! The purpose of this blog will be to share the Bionicle MOCs I’ve made over the past few years and tell the stories about the world I’ve developed with them. But before I get ahead of myself, let me get everyone up to speed (just in case you’re unfamiliar).

Q: What’s a MOC?

A: MOC stands for “my own creation,” and it’s what the Lego community has dubbed any model created by fans.

Q: “Bionicle?”

A: That was one of the many IPs Lego has released over the years, running from 2001-2010 and again from 2015-2016. Although an understanding of Bionicle’s story would be beneficial to the enjoyment of this blog, it is not necessary for two reasons.

1.  I will explain the important details as we go along.

2.  There is little relation between my stories and the so-called “canon” Bionicle story (this will make sense as we go along).

As of 2018, my story is still developing. I have a lot of work to do before I’m able to tell the entire saga from start to finish. In the meantime, I will be sharing the characters and tales I do have. Unlike my creations, I am human, meaning mistakes are bound to happen eventually. If they do, I ask that you respectfully call me out on it so I may learn from it and improve for the future.